This week’s prompt was to include the words: the rain turned the road into a river making the word count up to 108 altogether. If you’re interested, I tried to link this entry up to the Free Write Friday piece I wrote yesterday. Here are my 108 words:
Rain
It was raining on the day she left. I had left work early and bought her flowers on the way home. This romantic gesture was long overdue. I don’t know why it took me so long to realise how lucky I was to have her. The note she left was simple, ‘I just can’t do this anymore. Sorry.’ My gesture was too little, too late. I walked out into the road, tears streaming down my face along with the rain as it grew heavier. I sat down and the rain turned the road into a river, creeping higher and higher until I was submerged. There, I found peace.
If this is your first time here, and you’re wondering what 100 WCGU is all about, click on the image above for more information and to read other interpretations of this week’s prompt.
So beautiful and so sad at the same time. really well written!
Thanks! Beauty and sadness seem to be a theme for me this week…
That seems to be my most constant thread as well LOL
Love yourself. Act before it’s too late. Important lessons wrapped up in beautiful writing!
Thanks Miriam!
As an old song’s lyrics said, “you don’t know what you got till it’s gone”. We can’t assume people know how much we care about them. We need to show them we do. Well written.
Absolutely. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Ooh good ending! Didnt see that coming
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it